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Monday, 17 February 2020

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Hello 
My name is Julius I am 12 yrs old I am Maori  and I live in Auckland
I am in room 12 and my Teachers name is Mr Niks and i go to Glen Taylor
My goals are to be a good rugby,UFC fighter  
My hobbies is Touch,Rugby,UFC
writing
I like KFC 
playing with friends

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  2. Hi Julius,
    Your 2020 Blog Profile is very specific. Adding a little more information about yourself and a photo would make this profile even better! Your goals are very hard to achieve but if you put your mind to it, you can do anything!

    Your Welcome,
    Alanna

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  3. Hi Julius,
    I learnt quite a few new things about you but maybe you could add more information into your blog profile and maybe you could put in a photo. Good work though!

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  4. Hello Julius,
    This blog post is ok but you need to insert a photo of you, I didn't learn much about you from this but It was quite good.
    You just need a few adjustments and it'll be perfect.
    - Coree

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  5. Hi Julius,

    This is so prefect but what it needs is a photo, and it will be perfecto,but other then that great work.

    yours sincerely Ocean.

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  6. Hi Julius,
    Good Job on your blog profile.
    maybe next time you can add a bit more to it.
    But I still learnt more things.
    Great Job!

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  7. Hi Julius,
    Good work on your blog profile, I learned a few things about you from this. But I think you should add a photo of yourself and a little more writing then it'll it perfect. Great job anyways!

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  8. Hi Julius,
    Great work on your blog profile, I learned quite a few things about you from this blog profile. Try adding a picture of yourself! Other than that Keep Up The Great Work!

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  9. Great work, keep it up 👍

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  10. Hi Julius,
    Please try to use your punctuation right, could you decorate it? Example, you like KFC, maybe a add a picture of it? Otherwise, it was great!

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  11. Hi julius,
    please try to use your punctuation right, could you decorate it? Exaple, you like kfc, maybe a add a picture of it? Otherwise, it was great!

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  12. hi julius
    great work on youre profile its very interesting

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