There was a girl called Emily. As She stood alone on the frozen surface of the lake and she was looking at the stargazer. It was the most wonderful thing to look at and the only thing you can look at but if that was you were wishing for then. That will be the most wonderful thing to wish for. Wrapped up well bitterly cold wind. Emily caught a glimpse of something extraordinary though her telescope. It was in moments that she felt alive. Emily had the best job in the world.ever since she was a little girl. She was fascinated with stars….
Tuesday, 2 July 2019
Quick write
There was a girl called Emily. As She stood alone on the frozen surface of the lake and she was looking at the stargazer. It was the most wonderful thing to look at and the only thing you can look at but if that was you were wishing for then. That will be the most wonderful thing to wish for. Wrapped up well bitterly cold wind. Emily caught a glimpse of something extraordinary though her telescope. It was in moments that she felt alive. Emily had the best job in the world.ever since she was a little girl. She was fascinated with stars….
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Sup Julius,
ReplyDeleteYour writing is mean as, I like your creativity and the words you use for your writing. One tip I'd like to add is to proof read or reread your story to make sure it makes sense when you're done writing. But keep up the good work :)